Just a few thoughts, from the voices i can tell your a child, so I'll try to be a bit more layed back. I can tell you like drawing, but before you post a full blown animation, you might want to practice a bunch more, to make sure the animation is fluid, and non repetitive, and for starters, you might want to see if you can invest in a better program, such as a 30 day trial of flash animate. and for sound quality, you might not be able to afford much, so i wont hassle you on the quality of that, but for your voices, you may want to work on them a bit more, if you really like what you do. continue doing what your doing, just work on it a bit more, okay? good luck.